I wish I were the Border!
I would clear myself off this world
To keep its comeliness in order.
With my existence, they thought, their nations, they pearled
But I divide. Let me disappear and the only kinship prevails.
Let me disappear, disorder I breed.
Oh, mother Earth! I apologize for spoiling the grace of your children.
Because of me, the devil of Pollution prospered in your bosom
Because of me, all humane values lie rotten
As violent as a hungry lion, they won’t let you blossom.
I cause bloodshed on your holy scarf. Let me disappear for all’s sake.
Let me disappear, disorder I breed.
When your children put an end to each other’s life in my name
Saying they are dutiful, don’t love the earth but a bit of land
What a commitment of sin, oh, what a shame!
Patriotism will rest in peace and a fire of hatred fanned.
I am a gravedigger. Let me disappear and let life bloom.
Let me disappear, disorder I breed.
There are people who just want peace, not me.
Why is humanity not afraid of the great Judgement Day?
For our posterity let’s amend, a future with no barren lands they see.
No one wants to see the end of the world in such a malevolent way.
It will be jolly if I am gone, dear Earth! Let me disappear into a black hole.
Let me disappear, disorder I breed
Verry good Kinjal it’s very emotional
This poem is moving… It is unique… As the matter of fact… The idea is somehow really different… I wish I were… The bird… The President… I think these come to mind when you generally write on this particular topic… But BORDER… It is rare… And to be true you when first read the title… It seems a bit… Odd! But after reading the whole poem… You get to see the emotions the poet wants to convey for the cause she cares about. Peace was clearly a very important cause to choose… Keep up the good work!
Well written ,really meaningful, every line showing concerns about environment
I have ben reading from quite a long time but the I really like the feelings and true but hard messages shared by Kinjal. Keep up the great vision and let’s improve this world and make it better for living.
Amazing
Excellent poem. Amazing work!!!
It’s superb…. M amazed to see your creativity… God bless you baby
Awesome poem…words put in so beautifully. A very heart touching n a patriotic poem..keep it up Kinjal.
Amazing
सुंदर लेखनी के साथ सुंदर शब्दों का जो चयन किया गया हुआ है वह अतुलनीय है और मैं इस बच्ची ने जो अपने शब्दावली में से कविता के माध्यम से जो सर्कस में छुपे बाणों को निकाला है वह अपने आप में एक अद्भुत व विस्मयकारी है मैं भगवान से प्रार्थना करता हूं की अभी छुपे हुए सर्कस के तरकस के तूणीरो का समय-समय पर अपने विचारों व लेखनी के माध्यम से व्यक्त करती रहेगी
धन्यवाद
Excellent Poem Kinjal Didi 🤩😘😘😎🤗😇 I like your poem very much………😇😍😍 Your poem is the best 😊
Bahut sunder beta God bless you.
Aise hi apni lekhi ko uttam vicharo se yukt rakho jo samaj ko ek nayi disha pradan kare . Bahut bahut shubhkamnaye 👍👍
Beautiful ! You write with your heart and that is something I love. And you would become an amazing poet, I must say. Well written my dear.
Great poem …. great sentiments. Keep it up Kinjal
अद्भुत व अविस्मरणीय
Such a inspirational poem👏👏
Such sensitive minds and thoughtful youths will definitely bring positive and constructive change in the world.
Beautiful poem. Straight from the heart.
Keep it up Kinjal beta 👍😊
Words beautifully expressed. Lovely poem dear Kinjal. God bless.
It’s thought for humanity and ofcourse for mother earth…
Beautiful expressions
Amazing dear👌
Amazing dear 👌
Very nice!!!!!
Good efforts, keep it up
Wonderful and amazing thoughts…
Keep it up Kinjal👍
Very creative and thoughtful poem.keep it up.
Very nice .
Very nice 👍👍
The best one (Y)
Very NYC keep it up
Beautifully written
It’s wonderful
Amazing thoughts… Wonderful Poem👍
Keep it up Kinjal Kaushik !
Amazing thoughts!
It’s amazing ..👌👍👌
It’s amazing 👌 keep it up 👍
Powerful words and nicely written 👏👍
Osm Kinjal…keep it up👍👍