I opened my eyes and saw the world:
the world of chaos where the people
were in a race with billions in the world.
Roamed around and found out that the mortal was not interested in ambition, but in competition.
Just what could I see?
An embedded world of competition
As I proceeded, I got to know, there’s a thing called talent, which needs value in this world. But there’s another thing which is just a paper called money, that has the power to destroy a big thing called talent. I want to know, why people run behind these printed notes. Remember the world is full of chaos and rotten tomatoes because of these notes.
So, I think those humans need to be knurled just as done in the lathe.
Just what could I see?
An Embedded world of competition.
Mortals ran to get success, but when will they realize that’s excellence which will run behind them when they are diligent.
This is the world where students face competitive exams and it’s their parent’s pleasure to say their child great.
And this is so common. Everyone wants to grow toppers and rankers in their house. Want to get percentages. But think, can every child do this? They carry the burden on their small heads. And if they fail, what do they do?
Go suicide……………This is what happens
Just what could I see?
An embedded world of competition.
Just want to give a petition to this world. Never force your young ones and never put them in a race of bulldozers. Because getting marks is not a great thing. Everyone follows this safe path. Never scold or beat your kids much because beating an idol for more time may break the whole idol.
Love your kids to infinity, respect their small talents, because all are not one.
May that day come when I can say that this is an embedded world of value.
By Thanmayi.N
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wow its very nice.all the best. Its very meaningful and inspirational, and as said above in those comments, it says how the world today is.Hope it may be a eye opener poem.All the best. May she win it for sure
Wow, Thanmayi!!
Awesome! So beautifully written!
Keep up the good work. Proud of u😉!
All the best for your next work , it is awesome
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It’s very nice 👌. All the best for your next poem.
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